The Tennessean's feature on a mother's relationship with her gay daughter is a timely, up-to-the-minute feature. Or it would be, if this were the 1980s.
Seriously, how do you run 1,500-plus words on something like this in 2014? A sympathy piece on a devout woman who learns that her daughter is gay, then supports her against the prejudices of her church? A topic that was strip-mined years ago?
Mark Kellner, a friend of this blog, aptly calls this story "GR (GetReligion) bait." All of it is reported from the viewpoint of the mother. Not a word from the father or the son, or the daughter herself. And no one from church -- either the church that the mother attends or the one she left.
Purely from a writing standpoint, I can see why the story would interest an editor. Its terse, taut style would have made Hemingway proud:
Dawn Bennett thought she knew herself.
Wife. Mother of three. Devout Christian.
She thought she knew her daughter.
Guitarist. Softball player. Girl of unfaltering faith.
She didn't really know either.
Raising a gay child has taught her that.
In the six years since 19-year-old Erica Duclos looked into her mother's eyes and spoke openly about her sexuality, Bennett has fought fear, endured questions about God and grace, and struggled toward acceptance.
She loves her daughter, and she loves her God. Every day, her family and her faith collide. But the path forward is less about conflict than fortitude.
A promising lede, to be sure. But it doesn't deliver. Nor, as I've suggested, does it attempt anything like a balance.